r/writing • • 27d ago

Monthly "Would You Read This?" Thread

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Welcome to Would You Read This (WYRT), our monthly feedback and brainstorming thread. Share your work in progress below and let other readers tell you if they'd read it. Top level posts should follow this template:

  • Title:
    • If you don't have a title yet, feel free to say UNTITLED.
  • Genre:
    • Please include at least Fiction, Nonfiction, Poetry, or another recognizable medium. You may also include more specific genres with a hyphen. Ex. Fiction - Romance, or Nonfiction - Memoir. Genre will help users find the specific kinds of posts they'd like to give feedback on.
  • Premise:
    • A few sentences about the project. Try your best to keep this short. Crafting an expert elevator pitch is all part of becoming a successful working writer. Please do not post an entire plot summary or query letter (those are better suited for r/pubtips)
  • Sample (Optional):
    • You may share up to 500 words(ish) of sample material, or one poem for those working in the poetry medium. This is optional, so if you only have a premise, you can post just the premise for feedback.

If you post for feedback, please take the time to give feedback to at least 2-3 other users. Replies should follow this template.

  • Would Read / Might Read / Wouldn't Read
    • You must begin your reply with one of those. You are then encouraged to add additional thoughts on why you choose your answer.

Rules:

  • Please post no more than two WYRT top-level posts. There is no limit on the number of feedback replies you can make.
  • Do not link to any offsite materials. All materials must be in the body of the post. This includes "click here to read more" or "DM me for the rest" types of posts.
  • Rule 3 is in effect in this thread - No generative AI. Do not post material generated by an AI platform in your premise or sample. Do not use generative AI to respond to user's work.
  • Rule 5 is in effect - Civility and Community. Stay constructive. Blunt, direct feedback is fine, but do not insult other users, their writing, or their genres.

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r/writing • • Sep 01 '26

Monthly "Promote Yo' Self" Thread

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Welcome to our monthly Promote Yo' Self thread! Show the community what you put out into the world. Please follow this template:

  • Choose what you're promoting from the below options:
    • [Published Book]
    • [Article / Video / Project]
    • [Newsletter / Substack]
    • [Writing Community]
    • [Software / App]
    • [Call for Submissions]
    • [Milestone / Accomplishment]
  • Project Title
    • The title of your book, the name/title of your project, the name of your newsletter, the name of your writing community, the name of your software, or the title of your collection for which you are calling for submissions.
  • Description
    • A short premise or elevator pitch of your book, the subject matter of your newsletter, the purpose of your writing community, the purpose of your app, or the nature of your milestone.
      • Call for Submissions additionally require the following: Legal name of the entity calling for submissions, deadlines, fees, prizes, and rights requested.
  • Call to Action
    • What would you like r/writing to do? Buy your book? Subscribe to your newsletter? Submit a piece to your lit mag?
  • Discount for r/writing?
    • Share if/how the community can get a discount.

Rules:

  • Post no more than one top-level reply in the Promote Yo' Self thread each month, but you are allowed to post each month.
  • Rule 3 is in effect - No generative AI. You may not post projects generated by an AI platform, nor apps that use generative AI or expose writers' work to generative AI, nor may you post a Call for Submissions from an outlet that does not have a clear policy against publishing material produced by a generative AI platform.
  • Rule 5 is in effect - Civility and Community. Blunt, direct feedback is fine, but do not insult other users, other readers, or other genres.

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r/writing • • 16h ago

Discussion Ian Fleming's writing schedule

145 Upvotes

Has anyone seen this about how Ian Fleming sometimes wrote - https://www.reddit.com/r/HistoricalCapsule/s/gegDM4HLHS

I cannot imagine writing 2,000 words in a day. They'd be absolute dog shit. Obviously the first draft will always be terrible, but if I had to write that amount I'm not sure there'd be anything of value to edit.

That said, the snorkeling and gins between writing sessions sound rather nice...

It does make me curious as to how many reasonable words others can write in a day?


r/writing • • 48m ago

Discussion It’s interesting to look back at a less experienced “you” and see how far you’ve come

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This came about as I looked through my old posts and questions. In this server even. Now I would like to hear other people’s journey in the realm of noticing their own improvement. There’s something seriously intriguing about that.
If you were to look back at where writing maybe stumped you before, what would you say to yourself now?

I hope this post can also help give perspective for other people. Have a nice day or night! Peace ✌️


r/writing • • 1h ago

Discussion Magical realism and fantasy, where do they cross over?

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I write both, though not high fantasy, and I wondered how close they are, in terms of describing your work? My magical realism is set in realistic, modern worlds whereas the fantasy involves world-building but is still realistic, or plausible in a real world.

I've been feeling like my genres are combining in my latest book but maybe they're just two sides of a similar genre?


r/writing • • 21h ago

Discussion [Daily Discussion] General Discussion - October 27, 2026

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Welcome to our daily discussion thread!

This is the place to discuss anything writing related! Got silly questions? Brainstorming ideas? Need help with research? As long as rules 1, 3, and 5 are followed, this thread is your oyster!

Please refer to the monthly threads for sharing your work and for self-promotion.

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r/writing • • 1d ago

Discussion Author's style development throughout their writing

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What author you have read multiple works for that made you realised how much their style did change through the years ?

After finishing the white nights for dostoevsky and reading about 150 pages of crime and punishment I couldn't stop of thinking about how much his writing did change, I know their genre is quite different and there's 15 years between them yet its still fascinating to me how much the style did change


r/writing • • 1d ago

Discussion Scars are great for character development and inspiration

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I was sitting here with no idea what to write so decided I’d do some character development and ended up giving my character a scar. Now I have a story of how she got it, a fear she got with it and a way for her to start to work through that fear towards the beginning of the book. Wasn’t even planning to come up with any plot and now I have this. Plus it will make an interesting enough conversation to slot in somewhere


r/writing • • 1d ago

Advice Writing while walking

76 Upvotes

Do any of you try to write while walking outside? How has this worked out for you? My dog requires me to walk him 2 hours a day and this is kind of dead time to me.

Is there any kind of dictation app you use you. I would prefer not to pay a monthly subscription.but if that is the only thing decent available then I can do that. Thank you for your help


r/writing • • 1d ago

Beginner Question Kind of a noob question but I would greatly appreciate some help.

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I have two questions for experienced fiction writers.

1) I have realized that if I don’t get a story out in a short amount of time, I kind of lose interest in it. I haven’t been able to reach the end of a first draft yet because I usually lose interest because in my head, I already know the most important story beats and it begins to feel less “fresh”. Is there any way to combat this, ideally even into the editing process so that editing can also be fun?

2) How can I enjoy the editing process? Full disclosure, I have never reach that point except for one short story, and ngl, I never went through with it because it felt to me like I was grading a paper, circling grammar mistakes with red pen kind of thing and that wasn’t very fun to me. I’ve heard that the issue might be that I’m coming at this the wrong way and that I should worry about grammar editing maybe as one of the last things, first focusing on things like structure editing, taking out scenes that don’t work, etc, but I know very very very little about the editing process so idk how it CAN look for people. Idk what my options are or what I can do to make editing more fun for me, so if anyone could help me out with some pointers, I would greatly appreciate it.

That is all. Thank you in advance! <3


r/writing • • 2d ago

Discussion The writing advice I hate the most- "prose isn't that important to the story, the plot and characters are more important"

462 Upvotes

Imagine if an aspiring movie director were to say, "Visual storytelling isn't that important to the movie, the plot and characters are more important." What? Aren't the visuals the very basic foundation to the story in a movie (a primarily VISUAL medium)? Isn't that what sets film apart from most other modes of storytelling?

It's the same way when writing a book, which is primarily made up of words and sentences. It's called PROSE fiction because prose is the raw material which you have to work with when showing off your "amazing groundbreaking" plot and characters to the audience. How much sense does it make to try and separate your plot from the basic building blocks of storytelling in your medium?

This doesn't mean that your story must have "flowery" prose, or that anything written in a "simple" style is bad prose. It's true that Hemingway deliberately wrote using everyday language and uncomplicated sentence structure, but he also knew how to choose those words with intentionality. He knew how to write something akin to poetry, making music on the page, using that simple vocabulary. Many people I hear saying "you should write simply, like Hemingway," don't seem to care for poetry at all. They miss the opportunity to learn how to tell their story in the best way possible, because they think of the very basic building blocks of their chosen medium as something to work with as little as possible.


r/writing • • 1d ago

Discussion [Daily Discussion] General Discussion - October 26, 2026

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Welcome to our daily discussion thread!

This is the place to discuss anything writing related! Got silly questions? Brainstorming ideas? Need help with research? As long as rules 1, 3, and 5 are followed, this thread is your oyster!

Please refer to the monthly threads for sharing your work and for self-promotion.

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r/writing • • 2d ago

Advice Historical fiction writers.. what are your tips for dialogue and details?

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I'm working on my first historical fiction novel - in the planning/research stage - and making it authentic enough keeps intimidating me.

What are your tips for tackling the period dialogue and all the little period details? The setting is late 18th century Ireland and I'm worried I'll accidentally be anachronistic with details or the dialogue will come across as too modern sounding? Tysm!


r/writing • • 2d ago

Beginner Question Outline vs vomit draft

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i was looking at an old post about second drafts wondering if that meant entirely rewriting your story (I came to the conclusion what I already do with my one shots is a version of doing a second draft, which is reading through with fresh eyes and rewriting and adding and cutting) but I saw a lot of people talking about a thing called a “vomit draft” lol. Is that writing while skipping outlining? I saw a lot of people talking about how a second draft is fixing plot holes and story edits, which I’m sure there will still be stuff to fix like that in my second draft, but isn’t that also what outlining is for? Like planning out the story and making sure the plot works correctly and planning out your story beats? I saw someone say their vomit draft is to get their ideas on paper. Does a “vomit draft” and an outline function the same? I’m not expecting my first draft to be perfect ofc, but I don’t want to go in without a solid plan.

For clarity how I’ve gone about writing a book so far is I wrote a few paragraphs about the characters lives motivations and what I want to happen broadly to just have something down, then bulleted list writing down how I want the story to play out. Sometimes I get more details in places where I have a clearer picture, sometimes I’m more broad and leaving it up to how I write it in the moment with the rest of the details filled in. I’m mostly curious if they function similarly or if it’s just a weird way to say first draft and now I’m getting all up in my head about it haha


r/writing • • 2d ago

Discussion How do you come up with themes for your stories?

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I’m curious how everyone arrives at a central theme(s) to explore. Do you find that they come to you as you’re writing, only become clear in hindsight or do you start your writing process with a theme?

Examples of themes: good vs. evil, moral ambiguity, power and corruption, identity and self-discovery, coming of age, love and sacrifice, survival and resilience, death and mortality, technology and ethics etc.


r/writing • • 2d ago

Discussion What are some themes you keep circling around in your writing?

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To me, I keep circling around shame, fear, guilt, letting go/hanging on and isolation. Repetition/rythm is also a big part of it, but these themes always sort of make their way into my writing one way or another. I think I just really like the way you can explore these from different angles with different characters.


r/writing • • 1d ago

Discussion The problem with starting an entire series

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The problem being devoting that much time and creativity to something that next to no one is going to read. I have done it in the past, and I very much understand the appeal of wanting to tell a big story, where the world and characters one creates really get to breathe and develop. It can become much like spending time with dear friends.

The simple fact is, sequels inevitably get less attention than a first entry; that's their nature. And when one is an unknown, and a first entry doesn't get many readers to begin with.... well...

It's now been over a year since I completed my latest full-length manuscript. I send out the occasional query letter to agents, sort of like buying the odd lottery ticket. Other than that, I've just been writing shorter works for the sake of a creative outlet. I'm sometimes tempted to write a sequel, because I originally considered my story to be the start of a trilogy, or to start some other, series-length story. But at this point in my life, after basically giving up on marketing, it feels like time poorly spent, when I could be moving from one fresh idea to the other.

Does any of this sound familiar? How have you dealt with it?


r/writing • • 3d ago

Discussion What do you prioritise when you write?

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Hi,

I am getting back into writing for the first time in years. I have decided to try and write a contemporary fiction/romance book to dip my toes in. I have, as a result, been trying to read more books in these genres (ETA for clarity: I am not new to reading, but I am relatively new to reading these genres).

The issue is that some of the best selling and most heard-of authors do not write well. I'm currently roughly 100 pages into a book of one such author and it's going in the DNF pile. I can forgive the odd inconsistency or minor potholes, but this is so bad. Scenes that push part of the storyline but that fundamentally don't make sense. Specifically making a show of one part of the MFC's background, just to drop one of the key parts of that for no reason. A total lack of character building. One small similar example would be referencing her "Nanna" consistently for 70 odd pages, and then suddenly using "Grandma" for a few pages instead.

I have spent a lot of time already making sure my plot makes sense, there are no holes and I'm trying really hard to keep my characters consistent. So now I'm wondering if I'm prioritising something that the audience doesn't actually care about? Is it a genre/writing style mismatch? Should I be prioritising punchy nonsense over an ironclad plot? Character development? Something else? Am I overthinking it completely?

What do you prioritise when you write? It would be helpful if you're able to include the genre you write for too but I'm mostly just curious about priorities!


r/writing • • 2d ago

Discussion [Daily Discussion] General Discussion - October 25, 2026

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Welcome to our daily discussion thread!

This is the place to discuss anything writing related! Got silly questions? Brainstorming ideas? Need help with research? As long as rules 1, 3, and 5 are followed, this thread is your oyster!

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r/writing • • 3d ago

Discussion Jennette McCurdy on Writing a Novel

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I just really like this quote and it's so true.

"I was actually writing another novel, but I feel like this thing happens with ideas where working on a project is like being in a relationship. And in the beginning, it’s the honeymoon phase, and it’s amazing, and it’s sexy, and it’s hot, and it’s the greatest thing. And then it becomes work. And when it becomes work, all your other little ideas start looking real hot. And you’re going, Well, what if I dated them? Can I just take them out on one date real quick? "

- From the New York Times Modern Love Podcast

https://www.nytimes.com/2026/02/04/podcasts/the-real-story-behind-jennette-mccurdys-novel-half-his-age.html


r/writing • • 3d ago

Advice Do you write things you hate/dislike/don't want to happen?

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So I developed a plot, and I like it a lot. However, according to what I've already developed the next major plot point appears to involve the main pairing breaking up due to incompatibility. I've been having trouble continuing the plot because all roads seem to lead to it, which will then inevitably lead to even more terrible shit, but I really, really, really, really, really don't want this to happen.

What would you do in this situation? Do you try to work around it? Do you just suck it up and write it? How do you deal with it?


r/writing • • 4d ago

Discussion "Write intoxicated but edit sober"

481 Upvotes

This will probably get removed for low quality (and I honesly get it if it does), but I get it now, and that's what this post is about.

Writing non-sober is fun. Things just come easier. Who cares if it sucks? At least it's down.

The parts of my book I'm writing now are boring and I've frankly been avoiding them because of it. Thanks to my friend Crown Royal, words are pouring out of me. All my worries are gone.

Is the dialog going to feel forced? Is the solution too easy? Is my character a Mary-Sue? WAS MY 18TH CENTURY ENGLISH LIT PROFESSOR RIGHT (told me I can't write a decent English sentence. Screw him and scew Dickens.)?

Doesn't matter. That's why editing is a thing. I'm probably going to read all of this in a few days and wonder what the hell I was thinking, but again, it's down and it means I can move forward.

I've been considering going back to non-linear writing for weeks, but I know it will lead to having to go back and change things five thousand times and that sucks just as much as heavy editing, so I don't see the advantage. Ping pong editing is for the birds.

Obvious disclaimer: I do not condone doing this consistently. It can lead to a slippery slope no one wants to slide down. But once and a while? Can't hurt; won't hurt. Writing is about exploring the parts of ourselves that we wouldn't always bring to light, and sometimes being sober means talking ourselves out of taking risks and being our True Selves. I'm not a drinker, and so why shouldn't I have some fun every now and then?

Anyways. Cheers, friends, and have a wonderful weekend. <3


r/writing • • 3d ago

Discussion [Daily Discussion] General Discussion - October 24, 2026

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Welcome to our daily discussion thread!

This is the place to discuss anything writing related! Got silly questions? Brainstorming ideas? Need help with research? As long as rules 1, 3, and 5 are followed, this thread is your oyster!

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r/writing • • 4d ago

Discussion Have you ever rewritten someone else's bad book as a writing exercise? What was that experience like for you, and what kind of changes did you make?

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Just kind of a fun discussion! I want to hear people's own experiences.

I'm rewriting someone else's professionally published book that I think is just horrible but has seeds of good ideas. It's just for me / for fun / for practice, and i have no intention of even posting it.

Have you ever done something similar? What kind of changes did you make? What was your process like? What did you learn? What was your planning process? Etc etc etc I'm just so curious how other people experienced the same thing !

Right now I'm in the middle of fixing the worldbuilding, which has been really fun. Starting with the seed of something from someone else and expanding upon what was lacking to make it make more sense and actually fit the themes of the story is really scratching an itch. It kind of feels like a puzzle. How do I take these small pieces the author left and turn them into a full picture? It's great

Feel free to say what book you rewrote BUT keep it civil if you do lol

Edit: guys i know what fanfic is 😭 please stop saying "you mean fanfic?" I've been reading and writing fanfiction for 20 years


r/writing • • 4d ago

Discussion The Chúbee bottleneck

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I have an odd question for y'all!

I'm presenting to some college students soon about submitting short stories for publication, and I'll be talking about what I've termed the Chúbee bottleneck. The Chúbee bottleneck is an endless source of anguish for writers: it's the fact that there are billions of readers and hundreds of millions of writers on Earth, but because the average person only reads a few books a year, if any (and even the more voracious readers rarely read more than 50 a year, unless they're a middle schooler discovering Warriors for the first time), but the same book can be read by billions of people and social media is making the media landscape more winner-takes-all, only a tiny percentage of written works squeeze through the "bottleneck" and get into the hands of those billions of readers.

Because my background is in short stories, I'm confident about teaching the students strategies for the Chúbee bottleneck when writing short stories. However, a number of the students write novels, and I want to have a slide for them too. Since I know publishing questions aren't allowed on this sub, I'm more curious about your opinions from a writing-content perspective (ie, for the work that you do while writing the story, not when it's a finished project and you're trying to market it). What strategies do you use to write stories with the best shot of breaking through that bottleneck?