r/ReadMyScript • • Dec 11 '25

A brief word on formatting the scripts in your posts

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I just removed a post that began with, "I know this isn't written in proper screenplay format, but . . ." If you want people to take your work seriously, show a serious devotion to the craft, and learn proper format.


r/ReadMyScript • • 8h ago

Interdiction. A 90 page script. Please tear it apart if your willing.

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I have better scripts then this but this is the one I need to fix and I actually had this for a fan script of a TV show that I decided to convert to it's own IP so I can at least start building up something I can pitch.

I had a full movie script also for them but I never really had a realistic chance without an agent, so I am just going to make my own IP and refine it for a few scripts and try to create a series around it. This is, a stepping stone. A fully independent IP planned out.

(honestly I have a bit of hope to draw the attention of an agent someday far off. But time goes by and so does my life.)

I spent a long time on fan scripts and I am at the point where I am going to start moving away from fan scripts. Would people be willing to tear this apart? thanks. https://blcklst.com/projects/237025

(Or you could read the star wars version of it for the first 45 pages though I dont know what I did with the second half of the star wars version etc..) https://drive.google.com/file/d/1L31yuypGUV_vjBZOav5bzVSgzlXPypgs/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript • • 8h ago

The Tether — Psychological Thriller (16 pages)

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Hey everyone! I recently finished writing a short film screenplay called The Tether, a psychological thriller exploring loneliness, relationships, and the fine line between love and obsession.
I’m looking to get some readers interested in the project and would love to hear feedback from people who enjoy psychological thrillers.
If the premise sounds interesting, I’d appreciate anyone willing to give it a read and share their honest thoughts!
Thanks!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_XT0sFpMJH6a7AWAI6ir0_Hz6aR-EENb/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ReadMyScript • • 14h ago

[FEATURE] The Night — Psychological/Supernatural Horror (~90 pages)

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Genre: Psychological horror / supernatural horror

Logline: After his mother’s death, a young man is pulled through a single night of shifting nightmares where grief, guilt, and something older than him refuse to let him go.


r/ReadMyScript • • 15h ago

Tethered mystery/Comedy first five pages

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r/ReadMyScript • • 15h ago

Short One more - dark comedy - 9 pages

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r/ReadMyScript • • 17h ago

A sci-fi script I poured my heart into for a night read: "The Right to a Cradle"

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r/ReadMyScript • • 19h ago

Один пепел, антиутопия, драма, 4 страницы

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Hello everyone! Not long ago, I wrote a screenplay for a short film. This is my first script, and I would really appreciate any feedback or assessment you could provide. The screenplay was translated from Russian using Google Translate, so there may be some inaccuracies in the text. I also used Google Translate to write this post.

Logline: Human soldier Ksen infiltrates an alien civilization to steal their superweapon. But as he observes the life of one of his supposed enemies, he discovers that the man is a father and a family man—just like himself. When these two soldiers from opposite sides of the war come face-to-face, they are forced to recognize the humanity in one another—at the very moment their worlds are being consumed by war.

You can find a link to the PDF file below. Please let me know what you think! https://drive.google.com/file/d/1x7MYOB-v38b1cLyAcnFYL4HyLC1F1DHy/view?usp=sharing

Дальше на Русском/Continuing in Russian

Всем привет, не так давно я написал сценарий короткого метра. Это мой первый сценарий и я бы очень хотел получить от любого из вас обратную связь и вашу оценку.

Логлайн: Человеческий солдат Ксен проникает в цивилизацию инопланетян, чтобы похитить их супероружие. Но, наблюдая за жизнью одного из предполагаемых врагов, он обнаруживает, что тот - такой же отец и семьянин, как и он сам. Когда два солдата по разные стороны войны сталкиваются лицом к лицу, им предстоит увидеть человечность друг в друге - в тот самый момент, когда их миры поглощает война.

Ниже я прекрипляю ссылку на PDF файл. Дайте пожалуйста обратную связь. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1UygEiQD7czv8R45MCIDiMXzLDH-M25Z5/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript • • 19h ago

Feature COACH - (COMEDY, SPORTS) - 98 PAGES

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With an 0-8 record and a million-dollar bet on the line, a disgraced football coach must turn his hopeless team into winners. Or die trying.

Think: Bad Santa meets Dodgeball, set on a Friday night football field.

Link to Script: Here

Content Warning: Language. Violence. Sexual content. Drug use. Gambling.

Hey folks!

Happy to share a new draft of this. Gunning for a better third act this time, and really trying to make it airtight while preserving the criminal aspect of the story. Thoughts are more than welcome, and I hope you enjoy!


r/ReadMyScript • • 22h ago

Hellraiser: Geometria Cordis (Spec Feature, Horror/Gothic Tragedy, 66 pages)

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Hi everyone,

As a die-hard fan of Clive Barker’s original vision, I’ve always felt the franchise was robbed of its true cosmic potential by decades of cheap, cash-in sequels. I wanted to fix that.

I wrote a tight feature script that completely ignores everything after 1988 and serves as a direct, elevated, and deeply philosophical continuation of the first two films. It explores the idea of Hell not as a slasher playground, but as a cold, absolute Order where pain is an interface and human anatomy is a schematic.

Title: Hellraiser: Geometria Cordis
Genre: Intellectual Body Horror / Gothic Tragedy
Tone: The Silence of the Lambs meets Event Horizon with the baroque poetic soul of early Clive Barker.

(Note on Pacing: The script sits at 66 pages, but due to the highly descriptive world-building prose, atmosphere-heavy scenes, and non-linear visual sequences, the estimated running time plays out as a full 90-minute feature).

Logline:
Years after escaping the Labyrinth, a traumatized Kirsty Cotton reconstructs her shattered life by dissecting the "geometry of madness" in a sterile county morgue, while a grown-up Tiffany Lockwood deciphers the shifting language of reality through ancient geoglyphs. But when a techno-mystical cult in Brooklyn stabilizes a corrupted mechanical gateway, both women must unite to dismantle a biomechanical machine before Julia brutally overwrites reality itself.

What’s inside:

  • Dr. Alan Richmond: A brilliant, cynical pathologist who views corpses as "the only honest patients."
  • The Prophet: A newly forged cyber-Cenobite operating a flesh-fused CNC milling machine in a Brooklyn basement.
  • Captain Elliot Spencer: Trapped in a melancholic, Art Deco purgatory—a tragic First World War officer fading into the blueprint of Pinhead.
  • The Climax: A complete structural and philosophical subversion of Leviathan’s rules, where the cold box of torment transforms into the geometry of the human heart (Geometria Cordis).

The document also includes a brief thematic manifesto and a full synopsis on the first pages to set the tone before Scene 1.

I’m looking for honest feedback on pacing, dialogue, and atmospheric weight. I'd also love to swap scripts if anyone is interested!

To prevent the post from being auto-removed by Reddit filters, I haven't included the Google Drive link here. Just drop a comment below expressing your interest, and I will immediately reply to you or slide into your DMs with the PDF script link!

I would be incredibly grateful for your support and upvotes if you enjoy my work. If this does well, I’d love to share it with other film and horror communities across Reddit.

"Angels to some, demons to others… The question is, who will you be when you cross over—really the One, or just someone other?"


r/ReadMyScript • • 23h ago

Hellraiser: Geometria Cordis (Spec Feature, Horror/Gothic Tragedy)

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Hi everyone,

I wanted to share a passion project that honors Clive Barker’s original vision. I’ve always felt the franchise was robbed of its true cosmic potential by decades of cheap sequels. I wanted to fix that.

I wrote a tight feature script that completely ignores everything after 1988 and serves as a direct, elevated, and deeply philosophical continuation of the first two films. It explores the idea of Hell not as a slasher playground, but as a cold, absolute Order where pain is an interface and human anatomy is a schematic.

Title: Hellraiser: Geometria Cordis
Pages: 66
Genre: Intellectual Body Horror / Gothic Tragedy
Tone: The Silence of the Lambs meets Event Horizon with the baroque poetic soul of early Clive Barker.

Logline:
Years after escaping the Labyrinth, a traumatized Kirsty Cotton reconstructs her shattered life by dissecting the "geometry of madness" in a sterile county morgue, while a grown-up Tiffany Lockwood deciphers the shifting language of reality through ancient geoglyphs. But when a techno-mystical cult in Brooklyn stabilizes a corrupted mechanical gateway, both women must unite to dismantle a biomechanical machine before Julia brutally overwrites reality itself.

What’s inside:

  • Dr. Alan Richmond: A brilliant, cynical pathologist who views corpses as "the only honest patients."
  • The Prophet: A newly forged cyber-Cenobite operating a flesh-fused CNC milling machine in a Brooklyn basement.
  • Captain Elliot Spencer: Trapped in a melancholic, Art Deco purgatory—a tragic First World War officer fading into the blueprint of Pinhead.
  • The Climax: A complete structural and philosophical subversion of Leviathan’s rules, where the cold box of torment transforms into the geometry of the human heart (Geometria Cordis).

To prevent the post from being auto-removed by Reddit filters, I haven't included the Google Drive link here. Just drop a comment below expressing your interest, and I will immediately reply to you or slide into your DMs with the PDF script link!

I would be incredibly grateful for your support and upvotes if you enjoy my work. If this does well, I’d love to share it with other film and horror communities across Reddit.

Note: The document includes a brief thematic manifesto and a full synopsis on the first pages to set the tone before Scene 1. (It also serves as a style-proof for my original, upcoming sci-fi/historical project).

I’m looking for honest feedback on pacing, dialogue, and atmospheric weight. I'd also love to swap scripts if anyone is interested.

"Angels to some, demons to others… The question is, who will you be when you cross over—really the One, or just someone other?"


r/ReadMyScript • • 1d ago

Maddie’s World horror/sitcom 37pgs

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r/ReadMyScript • • 1d ago

Short FANTASY FILM - short comedy script (18 pgs)

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Read Here

LOGLINE: A simple game of DND goes awry when the group's Dungeon Master takes the campaign way too far, bringing the game's conflicts into reality.

Hi. Just looking for basic feedback or ideas.

I'm most concerned about the fact that it's kind of a strange concept to put to paper, so I just want to make sure I've written it in a way that's actually intelligible. If not, any pointers on how to format it better would be most helpful.

Also I'm bad with loglines, so any tips on that are appreciated.

Thank you & enjoy.


r/ReadMyScript • • 3d ago

Gringo Loco / 95pgs. / Horror

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"Sinners" meets "Street Fighters" meets "Sound of Freedom."

"When a pastor’s teenage daughter is kidnapped by a vampire cartel, a haunted former military policeman must infiltrate their brutal underground fighting tournament to reach the vampires’ stronghold and rescue her before she becomes their next victim."

Screenplay just went up on the Blacklist.

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/ng2nmhjtuk9mrzdo9675o/Gringo-Loco.pdf?rlkey=0u0y8u0crcfpw2x3ypf1imzsu&st=cm5zzkny&dl=0


r/ReadMyScript • • 3d ago

[Feature] Revenge on Rails - Action/Thriller

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Logline: After a brutal tragedy ruins his life, a young MMA fighter working as a mall janitor finds a second chance at love—only for a gang of violent train robbers to trap them aboard a speeding locomotive.

Page Count: 54 Pages

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Dod3MtWdGVv1-8OnvCKoNNfc6XFOzY6N/view?usp=sharing

Hey everyone, I'm 15 and I just finished this script in a 4-day burst of motivation after watching the movie Kill. It’s a hyper-violent, fast-paced action script set entirely on a train.

Since I'm young and just starting out, I can't afford official registration or script hosting fees yet, so I'm putting it out here. I would love some honest feedback on the pacing and how visual the action sequences feel to you. Thanks for reading!


r/ReadMyScript • • 4d ago

Short [Short Script - Horror] Need feedback - Down The Fourth Street - 4 pages. Want to know if the idea is coming through.

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Title: Down The Fourth Street

Genre: Horror / Allegory

Pages: 4

Logline: In a neighborhood where one street is said to be home to devils, a boy is sent there to fetch a lost cricket ball.

Would love an honest feedback on the story, the formatting and if the idea of social prejudice is coming through the script.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1fHNgG85uozrbXW0bbG64rjkV4Wultj8j/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript • • 3d ago

Feature My superhero screenplay "AI Man" is now available for you to read for free.

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My superhero screenplay "AI Man" is now available for you to read for free.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1gZ2aL8NG6qBCJjMmBIywJ6gvLqafX4rh/view?usp=drivesdk

I don't have money or resources to make this film. 

If you help me make this into a feature film. I would split the profit with you. I will take only 2% royalty fee.


r/ReadMyScript • • 4d ago

Five Singles and a Funeral (drama comedy proposal)

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This is a proposal movie or tv drama/comedy ( social SF and euthanasia theme) 120 pages.

Sooner or later, the whole world will be talking about this: how easy should it be for elderly people to decide that their life has been "long enough"...And as a next step: will societies even put more pressure on them to end their lives? Is it possible to present this universal question with a drama/comedy, including romantic and humorous parts?

We look for a fantastic producer and director for this project, which revolves around very current universal themes. This film may also be made in a low-budget version (e.g. in Europe in existing real settings ) - e.g., a few million, not tens - but still thought-provoking in the whole world.

Our scenario deals with a social theme that is becoming increasingly relevant throughout the world:  what happens when there are too few caregivers available for the growing number of elderly people? Is it a conceivable "solution" to allow (encourage?) euthanasia in the elderly more easily (as some insurers already claim)? Or to give robots a role in care? This difficult consideration is presented here on the basis of personal stories of the main characters ( from 1990 till -as Science Fiction- 2044), including many romantic, humorous and sometimes hilarious (but respectful).

Via the link, you will find our treatment/pitch. We are certainly available for your questions and hope to realize this beautiful project together with you.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pPxgcPJDcl28J_n4AzGtdL4QVtQ13C-IPd1ReRt0ZhQ/edit?usp=sharing

We also have an adaptation to a mini-series (5 episodes) (or long film. 191 pages; when desired soon expandable to 300 pages, 10-part miniseries).

I hope to get your ideas about that. Preferably, mail me. [Luc@deprost.be](mailto:Luc@deprost.be)


r/ReadMyScript • • 4d ago

Feature The Last Redneck in Appalachia - Feature Length - 127 Pages

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Title: The Last Redneck in Appalachia
Format: Feature Length
Page Length: 127 pages
Genres: Drama/Historical Drama
Logline: When a beloved coal baron steals his miners' pensions, the town communist in Trump-country West Virginia has to rally the neighbors who shunned him to take back the mountain his great-great-grandfather fought on in 1921.

Feedback: Anything is appreciated

Read Here


r/ReadMyScript • • 4d ago

LOCKED IN SLEEP - Short - 7 Pages

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Title: Locked In Sleep
Format: Short
Page length: 7 pages
Genres: Horror
Logline: After taking a handful of sleeping pills, a young person goes through nightmares that continue to get worse.

(logline isn't complete, I am still working on it.)

Feedback: Anything helps.

Read here.

NOTE: I know this is probably a weird concept. I tried to make the cliche "it was all a dream" into something that isn't very cliche. Hope it's interesting. Hope someone enjoys!


r/ReadMyScript • • 4d ago

Looking for black creatives to give feedback on my script (Dream Sweetly, Crime, 5 pages)

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The main character of this short film, Jack, is a an African American man, and I want to get feedback from people within that culture to avoid accidentally being insensitive, since I'm white and British. It has a very important theme of racism, as well as overt mentions of racist groups.

The script is here:

https://readthrough.com/d/H8We3V3ABfhpBwQ6xQmdFFCq3KuRoS

I would love feedback


r/ReadMyScript • • 5d ago

Exchange feedback This is the Overview of My Crime Drama Movi tell me is it good or not

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# **COUNTDOWN**

*Currently in Development*

**Genre:** Prison Revenge Thriller / Crime Drama / Psychological Action

After spending **fifteen years in prison** for a crime orchestrated by his closest friend, **Alan**, once a gifted young musician, walks out of prison carrying nothing except a small bag and memories that refuse to die. He enters a city that has completely forgotten him, while he has never forgotten the people who stole his life. Unknown to everyone, Alan has also been diagnosed with a terminal illness, silently accepting that his remaining time is limited. Instead of rebuilding his own life, he decides to finish the unfinished chapter of his past. The film opens with his release, while fragmented black-and-white prison flashbacks gradually unfold throughout the story instead of revealing everything at once.

As Alan begins tracking the criminal organization responsible for destroying his future, the audience initially believes they are watching a straightforward revenge thriller. Parallel flashbacks reveal his first years inside prison, where he was broken mentally and physically before meeting **Eugene**, an elderly murder convict serving his final years. Eugene becomes the father Alan never had, teaching him not only how to survive the brutality of prison but also how revenge had already destroyed Eugene's own life long before prison did. Their friendship spans five years until Eugene is sentenced to death. Before his execution, Alan asks him a question the audience cannot hear. The conversation remains incomplete, becoming one of the film's biggest mysteries.

Back in the present, Alan begins eliminating the gang members one by one with calculated precision. Every murder attracts the attention of **Officer Johnson**, an intelligent police investigator determined to stop the mysterious killer haunting the city. Johnson slowly realizes that Alan is responsible, launching an intense cat-and-mouse pursuit across the city. Again and again, Alan narrowly escapes, convincing the audience that he is simply one step smarter than the police.

Between revenge missions, Alan rents a modest apartment where he meets his cheerful young neighbour **Joan**, an aspiring drummer constantly struggling to learn music. One day, hearing her repeatedly play the wrong note, Alan casually says, "**Try C-sharp.**" Without explanation, he walks away. It is the first subtle glimpse that before prison, Alan had once lived for music. Joan slowly discovers that beneath Alan's cold exterior exists an incredibly kind but deeply wounded man. Their relationship grows quietly through everyday moments rather than dramatic confessions. Alan never openly speaks about love, yet his care becomes visible through actions—helping her improve her music, protecting her without expecting anything in return, and allowing her closer than anyone else has been since prison.

The prison flashbacks continue in pieces—years one to three, three to four, four to seven, then suddenly jump ahead to years nine to eleven and finally twelve to fifteen. The audience never notices that **the eighth year has been completely skipped**, unknowingly setting up the film's final revelation.

Alan eventually finds **Isaac**, the childhood friend whose greed and manipulation by senior gang members led to Alan's imprisonment fifteen years earlier. Expecting another execution, Isaac instead reveals that he abandoned crime years ago, built a peaceful family life and has regretted his betrayal every day since. Alan ultimately chooses forgiveness over revenge, recognizing that Isaac was never the true mastermind behind his suffering. As Alan leaves, Eugene's final unheard prison conversation is finally revealed. Alan asks, "**Did you regret doing it?**" Eugene silently shakes his head no, walks a few steps away, then quietly replies, "**Avoiding it would've been better... more peaceful.**" Alan finally understands that revenge never healed the man he admired most.

Unknown to Alan, Isaac's fear has already set another tragedy in motion. Believing Alan might still return, Isaac secretly places a bounty on him. The surviving gang members launch one final assault. After a high-speed chase through the city, Alan disappears. The criminals trace him to his apartment and storm inside, only to discover a hooded figure playing drums. Believing they have cornered Alan, they remove the hood and are stunned to find **Joan** instead. Seconds of complete silence follow before Alan is revealed on a neighbouring rooftop with a sniper rifle. A flashback explains that during the chase, Alan secretly exchanged clothes with Joan. The trap was planned together. Alan eliminates the attackers with flawless precision, ending the gang forever.

After the battle, Joan jokingly says, "**Guess I'm your partner in crime now.**" Alan says nothing. He throws away his weapon, gently touches her cheek, asks only, "**Are you okay?**" then pulls her into a tight embrace before softly kissing her cheek. Joan closes her eyes in shock, tears forming alongside a quiet smile. She kisses Alan's hand before hugging him back. From that moment onward, the audience never again sees a weapon in Alan's hands.

Later, Alan walks alone and catches his reflection in a mirror—but instead of seeing himself, he sees **Eugene** staring back. Terrified, Alan realizes he has become the very man whose life warned him against revenge. The vision disappears, leaving only Alan's reflection.

Alan's illness finally overwhelms him. Without saying goodbye, he quietly leaves Joan's life. A month later, Joan receives news of Alan's funeral. Among the mourners sits Officer Johnson. Overcome with grief, Joan blames him for relentlessly hunting Alan. Johnson calmly replies that Alan once saved his life.

The missing **eighth year** is finally revealed. An eighteen-year-old Johnson had entered prison after a street fight, believing he would survive a few months. Instead, prison destroyed him. After three months he attempted suicide before Alan stopped him, telling him, "**You are the reason you're here... and you'll be the reason you'll get out.**" During the following months Alan became Johnson's mentor exactly as Eugene had once been for him. When Johnson was eventually proven innocent and released, he emotionally admitted, "**I don't think I'll ever be able to repay you.**" Alan simply laughed, punched his shoulder and replied, "**What... wanna come inside again?**"

Returning to the funeral, Johnson tells Joan, "**Funny, isn't it? The man who gave so many people hope... could never escape the battle inside himself.**" Joan finally understands there was far more to Alan than she had ever known.

When Joan returns home, she discovers an entire professional music set waiting for her—drums, guitars and every instrument Alan had once dreamed of owning himself. Beside them lies only a handwritten note ending with the words:

**"I couldn't do more. Love... Alan."**

As Joan breaks into tears, the film cuts to one final flashback. Years before betrayal and prison, young Alan and young Isaac joyfully play music together, dreaming of the future they believed would always belong to them. Their melody continues over the credits, transforming *Countdown* from a revenge story into one about forgiveness, legacy, lost innocence, and the quiet kindness that survives even after a life has ended.


r/ReadMyScript • • 5d ago

Feedback- Our Colony- Comedy Script- 10 pages

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r/ReadMyScript • • 6d ago

Name : ACE/jumanzi/ lost in map / hardest submit

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👁️Perspective should be Nepali vision

All not friend but random 4 people got tired of doing tour in their country call nepal and want to do something new but can't find any solution then when doing ABC trail 4 of them together meet at a location called Maya ko bhati it's a local stor for selling wins and beers in rural area they set and talks the 1 person from group called it's boring to do all thing he share the word gooes to stor aunt and aunt give them a suggestion and called them to kitchen. Dp you want some things new it's different and thrilling but it's ver hard then aunt explain everything then the for of them decide to do that aunt pulled out a map a local. Then 4 of them goes into that location found a map called ACE when they entering 4 of all them got excited but also got scared because aunt told them it's difficult then submitting MT everest . Ho guys read to enter the hap they have to go to return to aunt place to get key and sticker ................. 

They eneter into map and first person got 

First person saw a hanging door it's Mission is to go to that door and eneter into another place but to enter he have to complete something when he try to enter in the way of that door there are hanging trees on that trees there are 3 another people he mate all of them trying hard to win the 4 person because they got that missing like that ,....................

Contact: (cve43750@gmail.com)